This six takes place a few pages after last week’s when Alex and Andrew see each other for the first time.
The door opened and one of the most beautiful young men I had ever seen came running out, picked up Heather and swung her around. He was about 5’9”, small-boned and wiry, his sandy blond hair hung a little below his ears and there was a smattering of freckles across his nose. He was wearing worn jeans and a bright green, body hugging T-shirt, and cowboy boots; and I could see part of a tattoo just beneath the sleeve on his left arm.
“Hey, Heather, what did you bring me for graduation?” He stopped spinning her around and his eyes lit on me. “Oooooh, is this my present; he’s gorgeous.”
Good character description…I can just picture him! Just saying hello from the Challenge…
MakingTheWriteConnections
thanks. I’ve often said that one of the best compliments I ever got on my writing was the man who said he wanted to meet Alex and Andrew.
Very nice descriptions.